November 14, 2008

How to be a reader: Good book vs. bad book

It would be so convenient if we could classify books as either good or bad, as vegetables or candy, as Literature or Dross. Sometimes I really want to. Many of us have been on both the giving and receiving end of this campaign: “That’s trash!” or “I can’t believe you actually read that stuff” or “Those kinds of books will rot your brain.” We got it as kids, we get it as adults (and give it, perhaps). I think it’s good to question the merit of what we’re putting into our minds. But I also think it’s wise to challenge how we determine the value and quality of a book.

So we don’t have to name names, let’s invent two fictional works of fiction for our bout and put them on two extremes.

In the first corner, we have an excruciatingly profound work of literary fiction, All the Perfumes of Arabia (or APA). Geoffrey T. Neville toiled over APA for the first fifteen years of his adult life. After surviving World War 1, Neville despaired over the brevity of human existence, how our actions haunt us forever after, and the lack of redemption. What makes this book an enduring masterpiece is not only how Neville crafted the story but each sentence, each word, every comma (and of course, omitting any semicolons or exclamation marks, and using adverbs and adjectives sparingly). The Pulitzer Prize committee said of APA, “Neville takes an unflinching and unsentimental view of post-war America. His stark prose and flawed characters lead us to questions without answers, enveloped in a story both tragic and mundane, leading to the inevitable tragic and mundane ending.”

In the other corner, we have Hunger Bay, a mass market paperback found in your local grocery store. It is the eighty-eighth book penned by Plum Savage and took her a total of three weeks to write. Hunger Bay follows the same formula as sixty-seven of Savage’s other books, though this one has a spicy Cajun flavor. Javier, a brilliant and devastatingly handsome but world-weary doctor, flees his past for southern Louisiana. There he meets Bebelle, a strikingly beautiful Cajun woman, who goes crawfish hunting in loose peasant blouses and torn skirts, barefoot, her tanned legs bare up to her thighs, her black hair wild and loose. They are compatible emotionally and physically, but his past and her strict daddy keep them separated (except for a few choice adjective-ridden encounters) until at last Bebelle helps Javier forgive himself for his past, and in turn Javier helps Babelle’s father into a crocodile’s mouth. At last, Javier and Bebelle fall into each other’s arms forever, in a way that employs lots of adverbs and steams up your reading glasses.

So. Which book is the good book and which is the bad?

All the Perfumes of Arabia is embraced by critics, lauded with awards, studied in college classes, and seventy years after its publication is still in print, published in a “Desktop Classics” series, cover art featuring a painting by Renoir. Surely that means it’s a good book. Right?

Does Hunger Bay deserve the National Book Award, need to be required reading in college literature courses, turned into an Oscar-worthy movie, studied in depth and lauded as a terrifyingly gorgeous study of human nature and work of art? I would say not. Does that mean it's a bad book?

What is our criteria for a good book?

  • How long the writer took to write it?
  • How long ago it was written?
  • Whether or not it has a “happy” ending?
  • If it can be read quickly or takes careful studying to be enjoyed?
  • How many adverbs are employed?
  • What lessons the writer wants to teach us?
  • How many awards it received?
  • Which genre it espouses?
  • Whether or not it follows a formula?

There is no doubt there's a difference between the reading experience of those two books. I think when we expose ourselves to art, our minds are enlivened, our world changes. I don’t think I’d classify Hunger Bay as art (but I could be wrong). But is art for art’s sake the only reason we read? Should it be?

So, if those two books existed in isolation, if no one ever read them, it might be pretty easy to say Hunger Bay is trash and All the Perfumes of Arabia is fine literature. But something happens, some profound chemical reaction, when a reader is introduced. The reader takes the text and changes it just by reading it. The reader tells herself a story from the words on the page. It is a unique story only for her. Say Nancy Jones reads Hunger Bay and passes a pleasant afternoon, enjoying the experience but forgetting the story soon thereafter. Or perhaps Nancy finds correlations in the relationships between Bebelle and her own life, makes connections she never has before, and comes away knowing herself better? Or what if Nancy  hadn't read a book in 20 years, but Hunger Bay captured her and she discovered she liked reading after all. Maybe she'll keep reading grocery story mass market paperbacks, or maybe she'll even end up reading APA and loving that as well. For Nancy, was Hunger Bay a bad book?

Worth of story and quality of writing are difficult to measure. This isn’t mathematics, there are no absolutes. The only way to measure the quality of a book is by its effect on the reader. And every reader is different. There are some books that have survived the test of time. They were brilliant, insightful, and moving not only in the year they were written but continue to be so year after year. Shakespeare survives because his plots, characters, and words continue to resonate. Jane Austen feels as vibrant, funny, and delicious nearly 200 years later. But I know many readers who can’t stomach either Shakespeare or Austen. For those readers, they are not great writers. And what about books written recently. Do we really know what will survive? Perhaps Stephen King will still be read 300 years from now when all the National Book Award winners are long out of print. It seems kind of pointless to try and judge a book by whether or not it will last. It seems more worthwhile to measure its impact now, reader-by-reader.

I would like to submit that there are no bad books. There are no bad genres. I personally get the most out of reading books that are not only marvels of storytelling and wonders of wordsmithery, but exciting and new and full of vibrant characters who make discoveries and take journeys and fill me with hope. And other people want to read quiet, odd little tales of existential horror. Again, we’re all different.

There are loads of factors in deciding if a book is good or bad for a particular reader, a major one being age appropriateness. A three-year-old might clutch Knuffle Bunny to his chest and beg for it to be read over and over again. At age thirteen, he could read it and think it's stupid, pointless drivel. At age thirty, he could read it to his 3-year-old and fall back in love. During those years, Knuffle Bunny wasn’t the one who changed.

I used to be pretty elitist. And I still believe passionately that there are some books that are just fun and some that are works of art, and the reading experiences for both are different. I do believe it's positive to expose ourselves not only to books that are fun page turners but ones that express in words the unexpressable, that make us see the world in a new way, that tickle us with words and create metaphors that make the floor feel as if it's falling away from under us. Both have a place on my shelves.

So, who won our bout? I guess that’s for each reader to decide. For writers especially, I think it’s wise to read all kinds of literature. But at this particular moment and phase in my life, I would struggle to get through either of those books. I know other readers who would eat them up, and I would never feel comfortable telling them that either book is bad. But as for me, I think I’ll go read a Diana Wynne Jones.

November 10, 2008

Pumpkins and poetry

Everyone needs a creative outlet. Holding back or hiding it or not taking time just makes us sad or angry or frustrated. Kids need that in schools. Curse No Child Left Behind for taking so much time away from the creative arts in schools and forcing kids to taken endless tests and forcing teachers to teach to those tests!

Anyway, my friend Laura has two main creative outlets--limericks and pumpkin carving. Here she shakes her stuff on the Rapunzel theme:

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Rapunzel Retold
(in Limericks)

There once was a couple who traded
Their daughter for veggies they'd raided.
These were no magic beans,
Just plain salad greens,
But the hag would not be dissuaded.

Locked up 'til her skin had grown pallid,
This gal, aptly named for a salad,
Clung to one single hope
(Though her hair was like rope)
That someone would hear her sweet ballad.

Then a prince arrived at the tower.
"I'll save you my delicate flower."
So he climbed up her braid
But was somewhat dismayed
She'd gone seven years with no shower.

November 06, 2008

Come...to Austin!

Last post you witnessed my terrified response to Lauren's Scare-a-thon. Here are the current non-weinies:
Lauren Myracle
Kirsten Miller
Meg Cabot
Scott Westerfeld

Melissa de la Cruz

For pure entertainment, you can't go wrong with Scott's (or Mr. Westerfeld's) enchanting entry. I met Melissa in Austin and we have begun plotting for how to avenge ourselves on Lauren. Half the dared folk have yet to post proof, but I'll put up links when (and IF...) they do.

One thing I forgot to mention--the night of The Dean Witch Project, I waited at home while Dean went to the neighbor's to "set up." When he was ready for me, he called my cell phone.
Me: "Hello?"
Whispered Voice: "Come..."
Hang up.
That's about when the shaking started in earnest.

I'm back from Austin, one of my favorite cities. The book festival was wonderful. I got to meet squeetuser Maribeth, who drove four hours from Dallas (hooray for cool parents who support their kids' literary obsessions!). Four young girls read rapunzel's revenge with their mother/daughter bookclub and had the idea to make themselves braids. They came decked out to the event. Cute much?
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This Austin feature shows a cowboy riding a giant bunny. Take note, Nate, for future rapunzel's revenge sequels.

DSCN0067 I did several school visits and came away feeling so invigorated and hopeful about kids and educators. Despite such huge obstacles as No Child Left Behind, teachers, librarians, and other educators are still energetic and loving and excited about books and literacy. It's wonderful to see. Right on, Austin!

October 31, 2008

The Dean Witch Project

I did it. I met Lauren Myracle's Scare-a-Thon challenge. Allowing my horrifically creepy husband to scare me in a dark house seemed the best way to reach the highest "scare" quotient.

  • Scream along with me as I stumble through a dark house with no idea what to do!
  • Watch with fascination my amazing cinematographic skill as I feature my mouth and nose!
  • See the jumps as we edit awkwardly to cover up my terrified ineptitude!

Yes, that last point is particularly noteworthy. Right at the climax when I was at my most petrified, I hit Stop Record, as if I could turn off what was happening. I was amazed watching the video after to hear my breathing--I actually had rapid, labored breathing induced soley by fear. I was shaking for a good hour after. So curl up in a well-lit, safe, cozy room and enjoy. (And thanks, Shawn, for naming our incident!)

October 27, 2008

Lauren Myracle is a sadist

That's right, you heard me.

Lauren has dared 13 other YA authors to scare ourselves and post proof by midnight on Halloween. How? Anyway we can. Lauren, for example, will teach herself the Thriller dance, video herself doing it, and post it on youtube. You can read her reasons for this particular ordeal on her blog.

The other authors who have accepted the challenge:
M.T. Anderson
Holly Black
Libba Bray
Meg Cabot
Cassandra Clare
Melissa De La Cruz
John Green
Shannon Hale
Maureen Johnson
Stephenie Meyer
Kirsten Miller
Sarah Mlynowski
Scott Westerfeld

Of course I said yes. And, I'm terrified. Holly will do something involving zombies. Cassie plans to eat brains in Paris no less. Scott (or Mr. Westerfeld, since I've never met him) has declared "there will be blood." Meg will dress up as a fairy and go out in public. I think Libba is in Germany, which should make her fulfillment interesting. Tobin (M.T.) has agreed to be in the same room with me again (just kidding, don't know what he's cooking up). The rest have been silent...too silent. I've spent the last two days ruminating over everything that scares me, and the list is long. I've considered video taping myself doing the following things:

  • Jumping off a great height (hopefully with some sort of elastic cord attached)
  • Driving a motorcycle (but maybe not, because I don't actually want to die)
  • Watching a horror movie
  • Going door-to-door selling something
  • Public nudity
  • Singing a formerly-lovely song
  • Allowing my husband to hide somewhere in a dark house and scare me

What do you think I should do? What scares you? And why am I crazy enough to agree to this?

Lauren! (shakes fist at the sky)

October 25, 2008

Some tidbits

book of a thousand days won the Utah Book Award for Young People's Literature this week. The other finalists were Jessica Day George (Dragon Slippers) and Sara Zarr (Story of a Girl). I doubt in many fields, the finalists all sit together in the audience and cheer for each other. YA lit really is literature paradise.

I did an interview over at Maw Books. Natasha was involved in Blogging for Darfur. Most of you are aware of the gut-wrenching atrocities committed in the name of war and ethnic cleasing. It's truly frightening. I was reading a Captain America omnibus recently and was telling Dean how much I wished Captain America really existed so we could send him to Darfur. On second thought, Wonder Woman would be even better. Alas. It's up to us. And making a difference starts with being aware.

I'll be in Austin this weekend for the Texas Book Festival. Saturday, November 1, 8:00 in the Austin Bat Cave (how cool is that?) for Not for Required Reading. Sunday, November 2, 3:00-3:45 in the Capitol Extension Room E2.010, I'll present on rapunzel's revenge. Monday, November 3 (probably at 7 pm) I'll do a talk/signing at BookPeople.

rapunzel's revenge has received three starred reviews! All the reviews have been so wonderful, it's extremely gratifying. Most recently from Horn Book:
"Readers familiar with graphic novels will feel at home...Newbies may not realize how particularly well-matched the Hales' gutsy tale is to its format, but this introduction--with its high action quotient, immediate sensory thrills, and wisecracking heroes--should win many converts. With such a successful debut, one hopes to see more graphic novels from this trio."

This fall, I'm on the most harrowing deadline of my career. the actor and the housewife final draft is due on Halloween. I've been working every spare moment these past few months, at night until I can't keep typing anymore, during the day when Maggie naps, and utilizing more babysitting help than ever in my life. As soon as I turn it in, I rush back to forest born, and I'll have another month and a half to see that all tidied up. I think I can do it, but it's tight. Really tight. I've been working on both of them for two and a half years, but writing calamity jack and having a certain baby girl created some havoc with the dates. I promise I won't get in this situation again. Seriously. Promise.

October 20, 2008

Ani live and in person

Slj0810_feathale_2 I wrote an article about my reading history for School Library Journal called "How Reader Girl Got Her Groove Back." I got such a kick out of this--there was a little illustration, and I think it's supposed to be me. I think they hired an artist to make an image of me with a dragon! That's a first. I think I look pretty cute. Maybe I should wear more orange. (Illustration by Maura Condrick)

I promised a cool story about the cover model for the new goose girl paperback...but it fell through. There's a wonderful young actress who was a fan of the book from years ago. Her mother and I were in contact and she was going to pose for the cover. Unfortunately, the publishing and Hollywood are such different beasts, we couldn't find a contract that would work for both sides. Alas. Her name is Brie Larson and she is such a darling to have been willing, but I totally understand why it didn't work out for both sides. An actress needs some control of her image and how its used, and a publisher needs complete control of the image so they can reprint at will and promote the book.

A different model was used, a lovely young girl. Here's the new cover, which I think turned out really beautifully. This is not my mental image of Ani, though I don't know that we could ever find just the right model. I think the purpose of these new photo covers is not to replace the characters in our minds. They're not meant to appeal to those of us who already read the book, but to draw in a new audience who don't already have a mental image of the characters.

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And you can see the three new books now side-by-side:

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October 13, 2008

Squeetus exclusive: Nathan Hale

Nathanhale_3 Our next guest author is the illustrious Nathan Hale (no relation). Nate, of course, is the fantabulous illustrator of rapunzel's revenge. You can read a little about that collaboration here. He is even as we speak working on the sequel, calamity jack, which will be out spring 2010. He supports a family of four as an illustrator, an amazing accomplishment, due not only to his incredible talent but his astounding hard work. (think 16 hour/days, 7 days/week) His solo work includes the picture books The Devil You Know (optioned for film by the director of Night at the Museum) and Yellowbelly and Plum, one of Max's (and ours) favorite books.

Me: What's your favorite scene in Rapunzel's Revenge?

NH: The tree tower. I love the solitude of Rapunzel in the tiny room. There is a little sequence of panels where we see winter, fall and spring go by (top of page 27) which I'd love to have elaborated on for three or four pages. The escape from the tower is fun too, and I love the boar chase. Honestly, I could have done a whole book based on the first half of Part 1--you know, Manga style, telling the story of Rapunzel's Revenge in a series 24 books long.

Who are your favorite minor characters in Rapunzel?

7_2 I love Goldy. That goose was so helpful. If I needed to focus attention on anything, I could just point Goldy's head at it. She was like a living "LOOK HERE" sign. And she was funny too. I think she steals the scene in the jail break sequence (she steals other stuff too, if you look closely.) I like Rapunzel's mom, especially in the scene at the well. I also got a kick out of some very minor characters, "Tina's Terrible Trio" on page 110, the trio only got that one panel. But I feel they need a story of their own someday. A Pixar style short feature.

What do you enjoy drawing more: dinosaurs, devils, or toothless outlaws?

The combination. Really, that's one of the best things about being a children's illustrator. You get to do it all. I try to cultivate variety in the projects I take on. Earlier this year I had FOUR dinosaur projects in a row. (including Chronicle's "The Dinosaur's Night Before Christmas"--available now at Amazon.com! For all of your dinosaur and Christmas needs! Act now! Free CD of dinosaur carols included! Your holiday season is not complete without "Hark, the Pterodactyls Sing!") By the end of that stretch I was REALLY tired of painting scales. So it was nice to switch to a project that was totally dinosaur free. I'm sure by the time I finish Calamity Jack, I'll be dying to paint some dinosaurs again--or maybe some tall ships, I've always wanted to do a naval battle/pirate ship project.

10 Which schoolmate of Yellowbelly's is your favorite?

The easy answer is the little blonde boy in the black shirt. That's my son Ulysses.

As far as the monsters and robots go, I really like the little gray owl girl. When the book was going through sketch revisions, there were two characters that were cut. They still made the book, you can see them on the big playground spread, a shark girl in a tutu, and a cactus boy. Those two were originally in Yellowbelly's class. They were replaced by the dinosaur boy (wearing a cactus shirt) and one of the human kids. I was a big fan of those two, hopefully Yellowbelly will get a sequel where we can see more of them.14_2

Is there any song cooler than David Bowie's "Golden Years"? Oh yeah, what is it?

Sure, here's one. This song gives me chills every time. Every time.

Is there any cooler book title than Calamity Jack? And do you think you deserve some of our writing royalties because you thought of that name? What percent? Would you settle for an ice cream sandwich?

How about a Big Ed's Super Saucer? Do they still make those? The big cookie sandwich. Oh yeah. It's that little touch of salt that makes those so good.

482_2 I remember everyone was running through titles and nothing really seemed like it belonged on the same shelf with "Rapunzel's Revenge." Nothing sounded quite as pulpy and action-packed. "Calamity" is a nice $5 word you don't get to hear very much. I'm a big fan of Calamity Jane. One of my favorite books is Larry McMurtry's Buffalo Girls which is about Calamity Jane's trip to the London World's Fair with Buffalo Bill's Wild West Show--fantastic.

Who has been your favorite character to return to as you illustrate Calamity Jack?

Jack is great to draw--he draws himself really, he's got so much character. Boring answer, but my favorite person to draw in Jack is Jack.

How much recovery time are you going to need after illustrating Calamity Jack before you'd be willing to do a third graphic novel with us?

Oh we have to do a trilogy--nobody does just a book and a sequel. Gotta wrap it up in a box-set three-pack! I'll even give you the fairy tale to base book 3 on. Let's sa-a-a-ay Goldilocks and the Three Bears. Only the "bears" are giant, city protecting monsters and "Goldilocks" is a Napoleon style conqueror with a huge army. So Goldilocks rolls into a city and conquers it, then she's like, "This city's too warm." Then the monster's like, "Raaaaaaawr!" Repeat three times, it writes itself. You guys can fit Jack and Rapunzel in there somewhere, right? I have faith in you. Go!

That said, I'll need a little gap between books 2 and 3. I think book 3 should come out in 2013. That sounds so far away, like a year from a science fiction movie. 2013. Weird. I'll start the countdown now. Rapunzel 3, 2013.

Now I gotta get back to inking or Calamity Jack will come out in 2013. You can see updates of Calamity Jack, Yellowbelly, dinosaurs and more at my website.

Thank you, Nathan Hale (no relation)! Dean and I will get going on Goldilocks Bonaparte and the Three City-Protecting Monsters (in bookstores fall 2013!)

October 09, 2008

Rapunzel's cow

Dean, Nate and I will be at All Tucked In, in Bountiful, Utah this Saturday at 11 am for a Rapunzel's Revenge event. Wigs will be worn.

I got some photos from our terrific event at The Purple Cow in Tooele, Utah. FYI--If you're looking for a signed copy of Rapunzel's Revenge in hardcover, they stocked up. 
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Dean and I talking about collaboration and being on the Today show.

Shannon_and_quilt Sew Sweet quilting shop did a Goose Girl-inspired design for this quilt. I'm wearing a Tooele High sweatshirt, class of '39, which belonged to Dean's grandma, Lorraine Stonebreaker. First female student body VP!

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The Teague girls made us homemade cookies. Dolls!

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The Purple Cow had a poster made just for the event--their signature spokescow in Rapunzel attire. How cool is that?

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As we sign books.

Finally_reading Look at these great photo of a group of girls reading after getting their books. This is what it's all about!

October 03, 2008

The moral of the--wait, what’s a moral?

You’d think that by the horrific length of my last post, I would have had my say already on this topic, but I realized that I had assumed we all were using the same definition for “moral.”

Mb commented on the previous post, “To me there is a huge difference between theme and moral. A theme gives depth to a story, ties it together, and hopefully provokes thought. A moral comes out and says, "This is the lesson you should take away." A theme raises questions; a moral purports to give answers. When I write a story, the theme(s) tends to grow out of the story, often surprising me. Once I notice it, I might add more threads of it, but I don't start out by saying, "I'm going to write a book about loyalty now." I think some very talented authors are able to pull off a decent story despite such intentions -- but never because of them.”

I agree with every word of that insightful comment and I appreciate the distinction.

Let me give you an example of what a moral is, as I learned in a college creative class. In each episode of the old TV show, “Lassie,” Timmy would get into some kind of trouble, Lassie would save the day, and back in the family kitchen, Mom or Dad would sit Timmy down and tell him what he needed to learn from the events. “You see, Timmy, if you’d listened to me when I told you to avoid that abandoned shed, you never would have stepped on that rusty nail,” or, “You see, Timmy, when you don’t finish your chores, you end up neck-deep in quicksand,” or “You see, Timmy, not all black people are murderers.” Obviously this kind of instruction wasn’t terribly impactful, since Timmy continued in trouble for so many seasons.

If a person gets insight from a book, it’s so much more powerful if that person gleans their own message from the story itself rather than if the author offers a “You see, Timmy…” kind of summation. Like mb, I want my stories to ask questions, not force answers. I write stories that interest me, and what interests me most often is not ideas that are old and obvious, things I’m sure about, but things I’m unsure about. I write the story to understand, and I don’t want to force any conclusions I have on the reader, or I get in the way of the story. Writers who try to say what their story means are trying to seize more than their share of the storytelling, taking away from that 50% that is, in my opinion, the reader’s portion.

A theme, on the other hand, is the language of story--repeated ideas, threads of understanding, adding layers of depth. A story, I believe, should be fundamentally entertaining, but have substantial layers to explore beneath, if a reader is inclined to look. What your high school English teachers are trying to show you is that within the story itself, the author has woven questions and ideas that make the story more profound. Like mb, I never set out to write a story with a theme in mind, but as I’m writing, serendipity and grace lead me to interconnected ideas and repeated images that I began to tie together. Ack, you see how I end up talking in metaphors to try and explain!

Although I do think about themes as I write (even if I don’t think of them with that label necessarily) I am uncomfortable naming the themes in my own books. I prefer letting the reader do that. And often they won’t see the themes I struggled with, but find other themes that didn’t haunt me. That’s the magic of reading for me, and one reason why I think it’s unfortunate when someone tells a reader “You’re wrong” for what they took from the book. On one hand, in English class, you need to examine and prove your point from the text. In class, intuition is not evidence, nor should it be. But reading alone in your room, a story can inspire thoughts that aren’t in the actual text. While that may not be relevant for some English class papers, it is very cool, and one reason why I love to read.

But I fall back to the question, is an author responsible for the morals a reader takes from her book? Writing only about perfect characters who make good choices is boring--and unhelpful, really. It is instructive for me as a reader to read about characters who do things I wouldn’t and make mistakes. It’s a positive and enlightening way for me to think through it all without doing it. But when an author shows characters doing things, as a previous commentor said, that we would warn our our own child against, is that a problem? Is it okay as long as in the end we show the consequences of such actions? Not show the consequences in a didactic way, but in an honest way, a cause-and-effect way. Is the author the guardian of not only the story but what the story might teach?

In the last post, some commentors called me on using the phrase “it’s just a story,” (in a thoughtful and respectful way, I might add. Thank you.). I tried to put that phrase inside questions because I realize it’s a provocative phrase. Is there ever “just a story”? And what exactly is a story, its power, its inherent meaning? Worth considering, and perhaps the topic of a future post. I really appreciate all the great comments on this topic, because it’s not one I’m settled on myself. I think it’s complicated and abstract and worth thinking about.

September 30, 2008

How to be a reader: The moral of the story is…

An Amazon reviewer of Breaking Dawn, inside a passionate one-star review, explains how the problems Bella faces in the series get resolved in the end and then says, "So, girls don't worry. If you have problems, they will ALL work out. Is that what the author wants to tell her fans?"

Let me clarify that I don’t mean to criticize this particular reviewer or anyone who had problems with that book. I just find this example particularly fascinating and relevant to this discussion.

First of all, as a writer, I never sit down with a story and think, "Let's see, what do I want to teach my fans today?" Now some authors and some books force a message into the book, wrap a moral inside a story and kind of cram it down your throat. These books never work well. (I believe Stephenie Meyer is not that kind of author.) Any message that comes out of a good book will be the reader's call. You read the story, then your understanding, experience, and current need tells you your own personal message. Some might argue that “if you have problems, they will all work out” is a wonderful moral for a book. Others might argue that it’s unrealistic and too pat. It really depends on our personal experience, doesn’t it? Perhaps this reviewer has a current need to have a story express the devastation of life, the out-of-control destruction and confusion, and Breaking Dawn didn't do that for her. There are plenty of books out there that will deliver that message. Breaking Dawn isn't one. The reviewer had a very important, personal reaction to a story that is entirely valid for her, but be fair, it's not going to be valid for everyone. Your needs and reaction are personal--it's unrealistic to expect a book or author to deliver exactly the story you wanted.

Now trickier, I think, is answering this question: Is an author responsible for the morals a reader, especially a young reader, takes from her book?

I can say, I never write toward a moral. But then again, some writers do I read a fantasy trilogy a few years back. The first book was magnificent. But in the third book, I was shocked by how the author so obviously gave a moral to the story. It was a moral that I didn’t agree with, but even if I had, I’m very put off by a novel that asserts any moral. It wrecked the story for me. Later I read an interview with the author where he admitted writing the trilogy with the intent of teaching children about the dangers of x. This was shocking to me, and I think it’s rare. Most novelists are slaves to the story. It’s hard enough to write a book, let alone try to craft what it will mean to every reader and how it should instruct them how to view the world and live their lives. Nevertheless, I know that some writers do write toward a moral.

But whether a writer intends to moralize or not, are we responsible for any morals readers take from our books? I don’t know. In one way, I think writers who write for children especially need to be aware of what we’re saying and take care. On the other hand, I know there’s no possible way I can account for every way someone reads my books.

This has been on my mind recently as I’ve been writing this new book for adults, The Actor and the Housewife. The story centers around a married stay-at-home mother who meets and forms a friendship with a married male actor (and FYI, it’s not an austenland sequel, though it employs a similar narrative style). One of my early readers was concerned about the premise. Am I advocating friendships of married people of opposite genders? Am I encouraging behavior that can lead to adultery? Isn’t that dangerous? I took those concerns very seriously and thought and struggled with them for months. And ultimately I realized that I’m telling a story, and a story needs obstacles and problems. As a writer, I’m never trying to tell anyone how to live or even trying to make statements such as “friendships between married men and women are good!” As a writer, I’m trying to come up with an interesting story, and this story about two very opposite people (opposites in profession, belief, lifestyle, as well as gender) who somehow find common ground was fascinating to me. I’m interested in the characters and their journey, not the summation (I despise writing book summaries, avoid writing my own jacket text, and duck out of ever saying what my books mean). I write the story--the reader decides if there’s a moral. The moral the reader takes may be something about the importance of friendship, and they’ll decide that I am a like-minded and respectable person. Or the reader may read a different moral, such as “married men and woman should risk their marriages in order to be close pals,” and if they disagree with that idea, they could get offended (and write me angry emails). I had to come to the conclusion that the only way to prevent anyone from being offended by my books was to stop writing altogether.

Is J.K. Rowling teaching children how to be witches and wizards? Does Harry Potter encourage children to use swords and hide them in hats? Create secret societies in schools and defy authority? Set up elaborate pranks and drop out of school? Or is it just a story?

Is Stephenie Meyer telling girls that they should fall so deeply in love at age 17 that if their boyfriend leaves them, they should try to commit suicide? (and imitate the events of Breaking Dawn, which I won’t enumerate for spoiler reasons.) Or is it just a story?

Let’s assume that Rowling and Meyer are not moralizing but telling a story for entertainment. Are they still responsible for whatever morals a reader chooses to take? If a boy who read the Harry Potter series decides his principal is evil, sets off fireworks in school, and drops out to start a joke shop, is it Rowling’s fault? If a girl who has read Twilight is so distraught about a break up she attempts suicide, is it Meyer’s fault? (What if the girl has read Rome & Juliet too--is it also Shakespeare’s fault?)

Is the book powerful in and of itself, the carrier of a message that can change a reader’s life? Or is it just a story, and the reader is powerful by deciding if and how the book might change her life?

I think those who worry about what morals these books teach young people can sometimes sell them short. I don’t think young readers believe that they should emulate everything a character does, even if they identify with the character. I believe that they read a book, understand that it’s fiction, and take what they need from it. This doesn’t give writers for young readers free license to write dangerous and damaging stories, but I for one am not comfortable assigning where those lines are that we shouldn’t cross. I’ve talked about this before, but all I can do is try to live the best way I know how, and hope that as I try to write good stories that please my internal reader, good things will come through for other readers.

I don’t have absolute answers to these questions. But when I read, I try to assume that the other author, like me, isn’t trying to cram in a moral, but just trying to tell a story. And the power of moral is in my hands as the reader, whether to just enjoy the ride or find some nugget of truth that I can apply to my own life. For me, this attitude has created less stressful and more honest reading.

So the moral of this story is, when you assume, you turn the end of a verb into two pronouns. Or something. I’m interested in your thoughts on this sticky topic.

September 26, 2008

Three things that are just wrong

1. From a page in my son's counting book:
Let's count body parts! You have
1 head
1 nose
1 mouth
2 eyes
2 hands
9 fingers
10 toes

2. My neighbor Autumn Goodwin recently had her third baby. She woke her husband in the middle of the night believing she was in labor. They got the kids out of bed and took them to a relative's house, but suddenly the labor was much more intense. He hurried to the hospital and drove up to the emergency entrance.
"My wife's having a baby!" he said.
The orderly sighed, having dealt with many easily excited husbands and labors that last all day. He said, "Take a wheelchair and go bring her in."
The husband grabbed a wheelchair, rushed back to the car, and found his wife holding the baby. Yes, she delivered her own baby by herself alone in the car.
So I was talking to her about it on Sunday. "I saw an article last week about a 7-year-old child who helped deliver her mom's baby, and I thought, at least she had help! They should write an article about you."
Autumn laughed and told me that her mother phoned The Deseret News, Utah's largest newspaper, to tell them the story. Their reaction was, "We like it better when there's a hero who steps in and helps deliver the baby." They weren't interested in the story. Because there was no hero.
Um...excuse me? What about Autumn? Wasn't she the hero? Delivering her own baby? It's only an extraordinary story if someone helps the mother, but when a mother does something remarkable on her own then it's no good?
And I find myself incredibly pleased that in our story of Rapunzel, she gets herself out of the tower.

3. Stretch pants. (Perhaps I should specify--me in stretch pants. But no, I think I'll let that stand. Stretch pants.)

And at least one thing that is oh-so-right: our early autumn weather. Heaven!